” Insuperable Dreams” April 2014 Napowrimo day 4

My eyes run along
statues on lost paths,
near a tilting tower
that raises swords while it claims celebration,
time and smoke — the white pillows
at night; create fire, descending, restarting,
and reclining when dawn grows insuperable,
pressing a memory.

With transparent hands,
I reach for fantasy between the hours
of prowess cry and resurrection from the wet land,
facts hidden in the second movement are
the perpetual present with two words from my lips;
te extraño.

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4 responses to “” Insuperable Dreams” April 2014 Napowrimo day 4

  1. Oh, so beautiful!!!

  2. Very beautiful, Pamela…..I especially admire “of prowess cry and resurrection from the wet land,”

  3. I agree with both Annell and Sherry, and also thank you for the new word. I guessed at meaning, then looked it up. I was correct, lol. Words are wonderful things, especially yours,

    Elizabeth

    http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/

  4. With transparent hands,
    I reach for fantasy between the hours

    In those moments of moments one reaches out and murmurs ‘I miss you’. How tantalizing. Great write Pamelita!

    Hank

    http://imagery77.blogspot.com/2014/04/cute-little-fella_5.html

I appreciate all comments.

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