>open spaces monday poetry train #84

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Stretch me down a long narrow road

Of desire, passion and belief

Let me drown in the flood

Reach up and touch what you

feel with all your strength

Throw away old desires

Recoil inside a shell with limits

Feel the restrictions in a

pain of no release as it

pushes against the sides

Stretch me down a long narrow road

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4 responses to “>open spaces monday poetry train #84

  1. >That's a road we all walk in our imagination.

  2. >yes we do Stan! yes we do!Pamela

  3. >Loved that first line, and then hit again with it at the end…what a wonderful surprise. I think it worked super for repeating there.- Dina

  4. >Thanks Dina!;)Pamela

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