>love carry on tuesday # 63

>Life without love is like a tree without
blossoms or fruit
it doesn’t scintillate
no triumphant promise
nothing is superb
it’s a struggle
frenetic feelings
straps it down to precipitate
like walking on stilts
high above the prehistoric carbon waste
that doesn’t circulate within
the unbeliever’s soul

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8 responses to “>love carry on tuesday # 63

  1. >Love the tantalising sound of "scintillate"! An enigmatic, beautiful poem!

  2. >Liked the word 'scintillate' and the lines 'like walking on stilts high above the prehistoric carbon waste'

  3. >Gemma thanksPamela

  4. >Gordon thanksPamela

  5. >Love the part about walking on stilts. Great job.

  6. >Thanks Nara!Pamela

  7. >A lovely poem, and a great use of the prompt. Thanks for your support of Carry On Tuesday, it's really appreciated.

  8. >Keith not a problem and thanks!Pamela

I appreciate all comments.

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