>experiences poets united #11 pain

>Pain comes in waves

That dance round poles

of opposite forces

It may rise and fall

swing on the sideways

tilt

Feel pain form inside

Released through pores sealed tight

crusted and deadened by respirations

stiff

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18 responses to “>experiences poets united #11 pain

  1. >flaubert,Your words project the ultimate pain……..A very good 'feel' to express this Thursday Prompt, associated with Pain.Eileen

  2. >so true, succinct and soft.

  3. >Very nice; great response to the prompt.

  4. >Pamela, you have really captured the feeling of pain here.

  5. >Oh that tilt kills ya! Why do they make shoes an average of 2.5 inches across when the average woman's foot is 4 inches wide. I think men are the source, lol, although they'd never wear shoes that narrow! The pain is projected in your voice, Pamela! Excellent!

  6. >I love the tilt, and pain that dance round poles of opposite forces. It winds its way through… Well done!~Brenda

  7. >Flaubert, love the imagery in this it really projects the painful feelings. Wonderful writing! 🙂

  8. >Eileen pain comes in so many different forms.Thanks.Pamela

  9. >Cynthia thanks!Pamela

  10. >PaulThank you!Pamela

  11. >Mary always a pleasure to see you, thanks!Pamela

  12. >Diane thanks and I cannot even imagine a man wearing the painful shoes we wear, they do not have the stamina ;)Pamela

  13. >Thanks my friend Brenda!Pamela

  14. >Thanks so much Carrie!Pamela

  15. >Wonderful imagery in this piece! =)-Weasel

  16. >I can feel the pain within >.< So much images flowing into me at once :X

  17. >Thanks WeaselPamela

  18. >Riika thanks!Pamela

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