>she has been caught up writer’s island #17 time travel

>I thought today I would try some surrealist automatic writing.
It comes from a prompt over at we write poems that I participated
in back in July.  I started with the letter `S`

She walked through a maze set to the sound of a soft beating drum.

Sweet violins in the air with a melody only for her ears.

Swift is the journey with lace curtains in the breeze.

Scurrilous fairies flew high above with poisoned words.

Swinging tapestry that is meant to wrap round and suffocate.

Seven dimensions in time become apparent, attainable . . .

Succulent desires rise and form rings of truth in water on the sea.

Sand filling her eyes she cries for the fold to release her.

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30 responses to “>she has been caught up writer’s island #17 time travel

  1. >Nice, Pamela. My favorite is "Succulent desires rise and form rings of truth in water on the sea."

  2. >Some excellent lines in this. A clever exercise.

  3. >Surreal? Seems natural to me!Seriously, great images … and good initial lines for other poems from this automatic writing.

  4. >I liked this very much, nice take on the Time Travel prompt. :-)I LOVED the line "She walked through a maze set to the sound of a soft beating drum." – I could see it!

  5. >Your surrealism is beautiful…always enjoy your lovely writing! 🙂

  6. >Great way to tackle the subject of time travel.

  7. >Some wonderful lines in this one! Excellent post!-Weasel =)

  8. >i had a nice travel with your words Pam….thanks for the trip

  9. >Pamela, this is brilliant: is your automatic writing the same as what I call a freewrite? I take my hat off to you. I adore the scurrilous fairies and they're going in my notebook of gorgeous words and phrases.

  10. >My favorite line is the last: Sand filling her eyes she cries for the fold to release her.I can truly picture this! I love the sound of s's too!

  11. >Thanks Mary I enjoyed this prompt!Pamela

  12. >Thanks Anthony I like writing this way sometimes.Pamela

  13. >Thanks so much Gordon!Pamela

  14. >Pan thanks and nice to see you!Pamela

  15. >Thank you Carrie ;)Pamela

  16. >Thanks for that Stan!Pamela

  17. >Thanks Weasel I enjoyed yours as well!Pamela

  18. >Wayne you`re welcome and thanks!Pam

  19. >Viv thanks and yes they are one and the same.Pamela

  20. >Thanks tillybud and yours was excellent!Pamela

  21. >Me too Diane and thanks!Pamela

  22. >I really enjoyed the dream like quality of this, I could picture it all. I like it! 🙂

  23. >Susannah thanks and welcome!Pamela

  24. >Loved the sensual feel and sound of this Pamela. Really wonderful write and very satisfying read.Elizabeth

  25. >Elizabeth that is such a nice thing to saythanks for that.Pamela

  26. >truly beautiful =) I can feel myself within this poem XD

  27. >Thanks Riika that is a very nice thing to say!Pamela

  28. >Hey Pamela, Hot-damela — this piece kicked butt… there are a number of wonderful images contained herein… ;)…robp.s. if I have not said so before, I LOVE the photo you used as the header for your blog…

  29. >Thanks Rob and I needed a change.Pamela

I appreciate all comments.

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