>`one drop` poets united #12 water

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I
surge
during streams of
existence. I must sustain
this fluid touch, clear ecstasy and
balance to hydrate. Our senses come to
relief with a single drop released from sources,
past idiosyncrasies, lost forever without this contact.
essential and vital moves through the tributary in the air
depending on flows of oxygen. Swimming in the orbit of
space. Seeping in deep creases of saturated drips on
mountainous rocks lined with coolness over its
face. Its flow remains liquid on the
path of necessity for
life-water
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28 responses to “>`one drop` poets united #12 water

  1. >How beautifully constructed – in more ways than one…

  2. >Excellent poem, and I loved the shape. There is so much to be said for a single drop of water!

  3. >Your poem flows freely and effortlessly, like the water it describes. Wonderfully written!Thanks so much for stopping by my page and leaving a lovely comment…:)

  4. >Wonderfully written! The shape really brings out the poem! Awesome post!-Weasel =)

  5. >I love so many things about this poem: the way it looks on the page is fantastic, a ton of work just accomplishing THAT. And the language, the flow, the intelligence of it………..wow. Well done.

  6. >Thanks nino and thanks for an excellent prompt!Pamela

  7. >Mary thanks and yes there is so much to be said!Pamela

  8. >Thanks so much Lynette and thanks for visiting.Pamela

  9. >Weasel thanks so much and I hope school is going well.Pamela

  10. >Sherry thank you and I appreciate your kind words.Pamela

  11. >Pamela, I love what you did with this poem. I especially enjoyed "swimming in the orbit of space" and the shape of the poem. Very clever.

  12. >Thanks Diane and I had fun with this!Pamela

  13. >This is very well done 🙂 I've written a shaped piece before, a simple delta, and that was hard enough….This is just wonderful, and the poetry is class A too.

  14. >Really nice and I love the shape!

  15. >Nice shape! and wonderfully written poem, I am now trying to play around with the shapes and connecting it to my images =P Thank for the fun time Pamela^^~

  16. >Pamela, I love what you did with your poem for the prompt. Brilliant work! :-)And I love your new layout! 🙂

  17. >http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/27/friendship-means-a-world-2-me/pick three awards from my post,pass them to 1 to 10 blogging friends with whom you believe that they deserve them.have fun!Take good care.

  18. >Tracysays thanks for visiting and commenting!Pamela

  19. >Pan thanks for that!Pamela

  20. >Riika this was a lot of fun for me and thanks!Pamela

  21. >Carrie thanks and you are too kind!Pamela

  22. >Jingle thanks and I will try to do that!Pamela

  23. >It flows like water, really great!!! I love the variety and fluidity of it!

  24. >Thanks Ellie!And thanks for visiting!Pamela

  25. >Great flow and visual presentation…enjoyed reading you. (^_^)

  26. >Really good work on this, Pamela, lots of detail and wonderfully soft imagery, as well as a wealth of wisdom, all presented in one drop.Hat's off to you,Elizabeth

  27. >Dasun thanks for the comment and visiting!Pamela

  28. >ElizabethThanks for the nice compliment!Pamela

I appreciate all comments.

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