>a chance encounter poets united #13 kiss

Posted on September 2, 2010 | 20 Comments

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A softness of touch feels like feathers wisping by.
Sending shivers of pleasure through the particles: mine
Coloured rose upon labios plump: soft.
Brush against each other to meet suspended in time.
It is lingering, caressing, consuming: a first kiss.
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20 responses to “>a chance encounter poets united #13 kiss”

  1. Systematic Weasel | September 2, 2010 at 5:52 pm | Reply

    >Awesome post, Pamela! Wonderfully written! =)-Weasel

  2. Mary | September 2, 2010 at 6:08 pm | Reply

    >Beautiful and gentle poem, Pamela!

  3. flaubert | September 2, 2010 at 6:50 pm | Reply

    >Thanks Weasel!Pamela

  4. flaubert | September 2, 2010 at 6:53 pm | Reply

    >Thanks Mary! I know not my normal style as of late. Pamela

  5. signed...bkm | September 2, 2010 at 7:16 pm | Reply

    >lovely soft and beautiful kiss — a lingering kiss…nice…bkm

  6. Carrie Burtt | September 2, 2010 at 7:38 pm | Reply

    >"Feels like feathers wisping by"…Such beautiful imagery in this poem Pamela! I love it!:-)

  7. Diane T | September 2, 2010 at 9:43 pm | Reply

    >I love the feeling of feathers! Clearly beautiful!

  8. Ellie | September 2, 2010 at 10:46 pm | Reply

    >Tender and passionate….really nice!!! Love this~

  9. Elizabeth | September 2, 2010 at 11:00 pm | Reply

    >From the first line to the last, the poem whispers its tender tone and meaning. Wonderful Pamela.Elizabeth

  10. Sherry Blue Sky | September 2, 2010 at 11:07 pm | Reply

    >Oh yes, I vaguely remember now…..:) Beautifully written. Sounds even better than chocolate:)

  11. imaginationlane | September 3, 2010 at 3:36 am | Reply

    >Your soft and sensitive words form a gentle kiss of their own..just lovely!

  13. flaubert | September 3, 2010 at 12:19 pm | Reply

    >Carrie I am glad you liked it!Pamela

  14. flaubert | September 3, 2010 at 4:52 pm | Reply

    >Me, too! Thanks Diane!Pamela

  15. flaubert | September 3, 2010 at 4:53 pm | Reply

    >Thanks so much, Ellie!Pamela

  16. flaubert | September 3, 2010 at 4:54 pm | Reply

    >Elizabeth what a nice thing to say.Pamela

  17. flaubert | September 3, 2010 at 4:55 pm | Reply

    >It can be Sherry and thanks!Pamela

  18. flaubert | September 3, 2010 at 5:02 pm | Reply

    >ilane thanks and thanks for visiting!Pamela

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