>"wishing to fly" poets united thursday think tank #24 wings

>From deep within the chasm,
of her eternal sleep
A nymph child awakens,
nightmares have interrupted
peacefulness

A satyr whispers in her ear
“your wings for immortality”
While his flute vibrates
within her

Carefully,
Unfolding her tiny extensions,
examining their details,
crying for release,
wishing she could fly,
with undeveloped wings

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15 responses to “>"wishing to fly" poets united thursday think tank #24 wings

  1. >Why life forever if one cannot fly?Nice take on the 'wings' prompt!

  2. >Thanks Paul and thanks for the visit.Pamela

  3. >Eric,So, absolutely true. Thanks.Pamela

  4. >This is beautiful Pamela!

  5. >Thanks much Carrie.Pamela

  6. >http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/thursday-poets-rally-week-33-november-18-24/ Welcome attending poets rally week 33, link in a poem, visit 18 poets, done,Poetry awards assigned upon completion.Happy Friday!Thanks in advance for the attention!xxx

  7. >Pam,Undeveloped wings of the nymph child attracting the satyr? My, I sense trouble.

  8. >Thanks Jingle. I will give it a try.Pamela

  9. >Kaykuala,Could be some big problems coming her way. Thanks for the visit.Pamela

  10. >A haunting, evocative piece on so many levels…I completely understand trying to fly with underdeveloped wings…

  11. >Thanks Lynette and thanks for the visit.Pamela

  12. >Beautiful, Pamela! I love it!

I appreciate all comments.

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