Her linen table of prophets and scars,
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Her notes crawled through life without tender
caresses, just rusty memories walking beneath
Her soul lay cemented and frozen,
swept away by prophets and scars
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A compact exposition of the wordle words that works well.
Thanks Viv. I just read yours and thoroughly enjoyed it.
awwwww such sad place the wordle words took you to. lovely prose, though.
It is sad, I know, ddt. Thanks.
Pamela, this is a beautiful poem!
Thanks Mary.
Succinct and well-worded poem, Pamela. The despair is palpable.
Marianne, the words didn’t bring much light to mind. Thanks.
PS – Hope you enjoyed your time away!
Thanks Marianne. It was much needed. The Pacific coast is beautiful.
We used the words in a very similar fashion, yet fashioned two distinctly different worlds from them. I like that. Prophets and scars really do fit together well, Pamela.
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Elizabeth, they fit together nicely. I am not exactly certain as to why. Thanks.
My response seems to have disappeared. Don’t want to make a duplicate. Enjoyed your take on the words, found several similar thoughts in my own. Wonderful write, Pamela,
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Nice technique, opening and closing lines completing a circle. Very satisfying.
Thanks Mike, I loved your sonnet.
A very enjoyable read.
I love the way you so cleverly incorporated all the words into such a short piece.
Thanks for reading and commenting, Mike.
So touching and so universal. ‘prophets and scars’, I think we’ve all met both. Thanks for putting this together.
dk