“Summer’s Rest” Idyll Thoughts: Tuesday Tryouts with Margo Roby

She is calm, or fury;
breaths of
exaltations,
guiding and
wrapping
shattered skies

Without doors,
her perimeter’s
vast—
sustaining and
nurturing
scrimping shores

Pulpous leaves
rest tranquil,
floating eyes
ask wonder

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9 responses to ““Summer’s Rest” Idyll Thoughts: Tuesday Tryouts with Margo Roby

  1. I love your use of words in this poem, Pamela.

  2. The description is fascinating. I love creating images from the poem, Pamela.

    margo

  3. Pamela,
    Great writing! You have a knack of getting the correct words at the right places.

    Hank

  4. I like this very much. So much structure at times and you have captured how it is I like to think thoughts can be written down. Beautiful!

I appreciate all comments.

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