“The Coin” Napowrimo day #17

Posted on April 17, 2013 | 10 Comments

In a breezeless portrait,
a god-like howl rises
in mantra;
trusted to another
not endowed,
an eagle scowls
spectacle as snakes
writhe in copper.

Miz Quickly's day 17 Found Object

Miz Quickly’s day 17
Found Object

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10 responses to ““The Coin” Napowrimo day #17”

  1. Marianne | April 17, 2013 at 7:25 pm | Reply

    Wonderful description of a coin, Pamela! “Snakes
    writhe in copper” is perfection.

  2. Elizabeth | April 17, 2013 at 8:43 pm | Reply

    Wonderful image Pamela, it is getting tired out, isn’t it?

    Elizabeth

  3. Sharp Little Pencil | April 17, 2013 at 8:57 pm | Reply

    Pamelita, great poem. Yes, little copper coins need to go away now. They cost two cents apiece to make. I mean, really?! Well done. Amy

  4. brenda w | April 17, 2013 at 9:38 pm | Reply

    Gorgeous! I used mantra in my piece today, too. Your rising howl is wonderful.

  5. JulesPaige | April 18, 2013 at 10:37 am | Reply

    I pick up all found coins and donate them to charity. That is when I get enough of them. Even the ones so old that they are ‘green’ with envy for being left to lay about.

  6. Pamela | April 18, 2013 at 10:52 pm | Reply

    I have only this one coin, Jules. I doubt I should donate it.

I appreciate all comments.

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